Monday, August 17, 2009
Feature: Jim Benz Day 2
a fish bowl
Sky, a fish bowl, a dome
of light, bent
in shapes of death
and life, of silent
dreams or crow
conventions
on the wind, clustered
cloistered
Sky, a fish bowl
wrapped in cotton
muted color
faded, nightfall glimmers
swum in moods
a gentle touch
your lips, your breath
a fish bowl
swimming, swimming
spawning sky
a fish bowl
for nothing, everything
© Jim Benz
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"Fish" by Jen Pezzo
World Fish Bowl by Stephan Anstey
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Love this one.
ReplyDeleteoh so good, this one! and Jen, didn;t know you're such a cool artist! -- Nabina
ReplyDeleteThanks Nabina! :-) Me either. LOL
ReplyDeletedid JENS fishinspire the poem or did u write the poem and then pick the image?
ReplyDeleteI wrote the poem years ago, sans picture, but both these images are terrific -- Jim
ReplyDeleteThis sort of looks like a painting Charles, but I was just messing around in photoshop. Stephan's photo actually goes better with Jim's poem methinks.
ReplyDeleteAnd I LOVE this poem Jim. Your writing is gorgeous.